Another Comment on the Text by Noah Eli Gordon

                                                                after David Shapiro            Out of the evening, ash ate the ground A mouth of identical substance was deleted and the dress,                       torn to glittering scarves, less carelessly       randomized. Four survivors walked out of the Indian tidal…

                           

                                    after David Shapiro

           Out of the evening, ash ate the ground
A mouth of identical substance was deleted and the dress,
                      torn to glittering scarves, less carelessly
      randomized.
Four survivors walked out of the Indian
tidal wave.
Earth as clouds, clouds as a corpse
Evening as a victim one fully rendered
In wide white chalk and suturing the darkened center
Of its ownerless outline.

And a leaden skiff leaving us on land
January in July and the Old Testament
Proper nouns: presence.

Performance, pageantry, coup de grâce.

Like the dull female peacock near the grey fir

Palpable isolation and palpable intention. Protuberance.
Prisca’s grave prelude.
Innocence white Experience glossy red Songs are always green
I shun you in reach
I find you in distance
Your mask like a forest painted on both sides of the stage

by Noah Eli Gordon

published in New American Writing #26

Virginia 1208 182

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